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Post by Regine Dulin on Jun 22, 2012 15:04:26 GMT -5
A young man called Benjamin Schmidt, had a wonderful life with his dog Ralston Schmidt. But it was something that Benjamin have missed.. Love, real wonderful love. He had a big house, a good job and a cute dog. But not a wife, a honestly wife he can talk with. Live with, and get family with. But what can he do? After many years he decided to move, away from the smal city. Only to try to find love, after miles he found a little cute house in the big city. Now he had to use his eyes so maybe he can found his love.  After months with working and walking with his dog he was tired of his live, and then. A miracel happen, a long girl with brown eyes and hear came to the neighbour house. His heart was beeting so fast, she was wonderful.  Now he had his chance! But he question was, are she free or has she a boyfriend? No was the time to find that out! ' Should I write more ? And I am norwegian, so my english are not so good.. Just so you now ! |
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Post by Blair Malcolm on Jun 22, 2012 15:24:14 GMT -5
Yes, you should keep going!
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Post by Grace Rosen on Jun 22, 2012 16:55:15 GMT -5
Your english isn't that bad. There were a few minor errors, but nothing I couldn't figure out.  In the first picture the dog looks like it has invisible-ish hair. o.O |
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Post by Alicia Joy on Jun 22, 2012 17:17:42 GMT -5
Your english isn't that bad. There were a few minor errors, but nothing I couldn't figure out. In the first picture the dog looks like it has invisible-ish hair. o.O WOAH, it does xD |
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Post by Hannah Isaac on Jun 22, 2012 18:58:05 GMT -5
Your english isn't that bad. There were a few minor errors, but nothing I couldn't figure out. In the first picture the dog looks like it has invisible-ish hair. o.O Happens in my game too if I'm playing with advanced rendering off. It's so annoying. :/ Your story is good, keep going. My mum lives in Norway, it's a beautiful country! |
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Post by Regine Dulin on Jun 23, 2012 16:19:59 GMT -5
He was home and just waiting, waiting to the girl was back. Benjamin was a afraid boy, hate to do things wrong. Everytime he feel that he gonna to something wrong, he retires instead.The reason was simple to understand, he had never had a real girlfriend. He have been in love, but have always retires instead. But this time he decided to take a chance, do not be afraid and retires. So tonight he gonna go here home, and talk to here. But think if she have a boyfriend ? It's was the worst of all. Benjamin have to try, or he never gonna now it. His heart beet fast again, Ralston just stand there and look at his owner when he walk over the street and to the big ? house." Go inside !" Benjamin said to his dog and just waiting to the door is opened.  A smal and wonderful girl open the door, look at Benjamin and just smiled. " Hi, lovely house. I am your neighbour! And since we are neighbours so thought I we can get become better acquainted !" The girls said " Sure, I'm Hailey Shepherd. And you are ? " Benjamin smiled when she said here name. " Benjamin Schmidt !" Hailey just smiled back. " Just come in !" She said. After several hours, he finally asked she if she want to date him. He bit hos lover lip in the light of curiosity in her answer, what if she said no? But wait, what if she says yes ?! The question buzzing around in his head.  *Thanks everyone ! Because of you all I want to write more !Sooo, should I write more ? ^^ * |
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Post by chloebarlow on Jun 25, 2012 2:52:46 GMT -5
I read it! like it where the next???
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Post by Grace Rosen on Jun 25, 2012 8:07:08 GMT -5
I read it, Regine. I wonder what she'll say.
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Post by Regine Dulin on Jun 25, 2012 9:17:37 GMT -5
" Sure ! " Said Hailey, Benjamin just smiled. " Let's se a movie !" Sad Benjamin, finally had he got a date. After years with waiting after the one, maybe she was ? He hope so, but he can't read her mind ..  After the movie walk they out. " Hailey ? What do you think about me? " He said, she just smiled. " You look amazing and are a great guy so far. " Benjamin look at here, Hailey gave he a hug. A long and hard hug.  The date was amazing and perfect for Benjamin. When the walk home together took Benjamin the hand to Hailey, she sad nothing just hold his hand to. " Do you want to go home to me ? " Said Benjamin, she sad yes and they walk home to him. Sitting on the couch and just relax.  But not for long, after around 20 minutes the walk to the bed. Look at each other, smiled. And 15 minutes later the was sleeping..   |
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Post by Alexa Rose on Jul 5, 2012 8:25:37 GMT -5
write more! i love it
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In the first picture the dog looks like it has invisible-ish hair. o.O
