Post by Danielle Tipton on Oct 21, 2012 16:45:23 GMT -5
originally a breyer script, could revise to fit a sim story though. About a young girl who starts out riding, bonds with a "Crazy" horse, and, then not telling the rest 
I need input ^.^
Characters:
Emily- Main character
Erica- Mother
Joseph- Ranch owner
Fancy Expectations- Lesson Horse
Big Chex- Training Horse
Commander Rieker- Erica’s “horse”
Winter Belle- Josephs.’s “Horse”
Scene 1-
Emily just got off the school bus, she looks next door to the stables. “Hmmm.” And then she runs to the stables, looking at all the beautiful horses.
Joseph- (comes up behind) Excuse me, ma’am, may I help you?
Emily- (Gasps in surprise) Um, no, I was just looking, I’ve never been close to a horse before
Joseph- (Thinks) Well, I’ll tell you what, let me put my bridle up and I’ll give you a tour.
Emily- I’d love that!
Joseph goes and puts his things down, then comes back.
Joseph- Well, come here and I’ll let you see the horses
They go around on a tour.
Emily- Thank you! Do you mind if I came back and rode one day?
Joseph- Wait here one minute (Goes in Barn, comes out with paper) Get your mom to sign this, and then, we’ll talk about lessons and riding.
Emily- Thank you!
Emily goes home, her mom is in the kitchen
Erica- Where have you been? It’s later than the bus ran, I was starting to get worried, did Terra take you home?
Emily- No, I went next door, they have really cool horses, and he gave me this form and everything!
Emily hands her the form
Erica- Emily, you know we don’t have the money for this, I mean, I know you like horses and all, but, I mean, you know I can’t pay for you to have lessons
Emily- I’ll ask for a discount! I’ll muck stalls, I’ll brush the horses, please mom! Just try!
Erica- (sighs) We’ll see… When you come home tomorrow, I’ll see about going and talking to the owners…
Emily- Thank you so much!
-fades to black, new day-
Emily walks into the house and her mom is sitting there.
Erica- Emily, I’ve thought this over… and, though I don’t like the idea, I’m going to let you try this. Lets go over there.
Emily- (eeps in delight) Oh, Thank you!
They go over to the horse stables and meet Joseph
Erica- Hello! I hear you offered my daughter lessons
Joseph- yes, ma’am I did. She seemed to like horses, so I thought I’d let her take the form home to you.
Erica- I just wanted to talk to you about all of this. I- Emily, could you please step out for a moment?
Emily- (hesitates) O-okay.
Emily Steps out
Erica- We just really don’t have the money, plain and simple. I couldn’t supply her with anything she needs for this, and I’m sorry.
Joseph- That’s okay, I wasn’t expecting a pay. I’m sure I can dig up an extra helmet, all she needs to do is show up.
Erica- That’s very kind of you! I… suppose, it would be alright then.
Erica signs the papers
Joseph- Great, she can start today!
Emily comes in and starts to thank them
Joseph- Come on, Let’s go find you a helmet.
I need input ^.^
Characters:
Emily- Main character
Erica- Mother
Joseph- Ranch owner
Fancy Expectations- Lesson Horse
Big Chex- Training Horse
Commander Rieker- Erica’s “horse”
Winter Belle- Josephs.’s “Horse”
Scene 1-
Emily just got off the school bus, she looks next door to the stables. “Hmmm.” And then she runs to the stables, looking at all the beautiful horses.
Joseph- (comes up behind) Excuse me, ma’am, may I help you?
Emily- (Gasps in surprise) Um, no, I was just looking, I’ve never been close to a horse before
Joseph- (Thinks) Well, I’ll tell you what, let me put my bridle up and I’ll give you a tour.
Emily- I’d love that!
Joseph goes and puts his things down, then comes back.
Joseph- Well, come here and I’ll let you see the horses
They go around on a tour.
Emily- Thank you! Do you mind if I came back and rode one day?
Joseph- Wait here one minute (Goes in Barn, comes out with paper) Get your mom to sign this, and then, we’ll talk about lessons and riding.
Emily- Thank you!
Emily goes home, her mom is in the kitchen
Erica- Where have you been? It’s later than the bus ran, I was starting to get worried, did Terra take you home?
Emily- No, I went next door, they have really cool horses, and he gave me this form and everything!
Emily hands her the form
Erica- Emily, you know we don’t have the money for this, I mean, I know you like horses and all, but, I mean, you know I can’t pay for you to have lessons
Emily- I’ll ask for a discount! I’ll muck stalls, I’ll brush the horses, please mom! Just try!
Erica- (sighs) We’ll see… When you come home tomorrow, I’ll see about going and talking to the owners…
Emily- Thank you so much!
-fades to black, new day-
Emily walks into the house and her mom is sitting there.
Erica- Emily, I’ve thought this over… and, though I don’t like the idea, I’m going to let you try this. Lets go over there.
Emily- (eeps in delight) Oh, Thank you!
They go over to the horse stables and meet Joseph
Erica- Hello! I hear you offered my daughter lessons
Joseph- yes, ma’am I did. She seemed to like horses, so I thought I’d let her take the form home to you.
Erica- I just wanted to talk to you about all of this. I- Emily, could you please step out for a moment?
Emily- (hesitates) O-okay.
Emily Steps out
Erica- We just really don’t have the money, plain and simple. I couldn’t supply her with anything she needs for this, and I’m sorry.
Joseph- That’s okay, I wasn’t expecting a pay. I’m sure I can dig up an extra helmet, all she needs to do is show up.
Erica- That’s very kind of you! I… suppose, it would be alright then.
Erica signs the papers
Joseph- Great, she can start today!
Emily comes in and starts to thank them
Joseph- Come on, Let’s go find you a helmet.
Sounds awesome, if theres anything you need ill be happy to help
