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Post by Melanie Roy on Dec 27, 2012 21:13:24 GMT -5
It's much better than I could ever do.... 10!
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 27, 2012 21:14:12 GMT -5
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Post by Skyler Carson on Dec 27, 2012 22:14:10 GMT -5
The mane and tail are really good for being new to using a tablet! Couple of things I'm going to point out though. Don't put too much dirt around the hooves. There is way too much around in the piaffe photo. Try putting less and making the occupacity lower. Try not to blur everything but the horse. I usually only blur whats behind it. Makes it a better looking depth of field. And I would play with adjustments. Sure its overcast weather, but they appear to be a bit too dark. Use some actions to make them look better. Overall I would give it a 6.5/10. Really good for being new to tablets! Keep practicing!  |
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Post by Katie Karan on Dec 27, 2012 23:12:35 GMT -5
Love the tail and mane but I feel like you need more light and color in your photo itself?
Other then that just try to make your mane look more natural
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 28, 2012 5:55:12 GMT -5
ok, thanks |
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Post by Jenny Maywood on Dec 28, 2012 5:59:22 GMT -5
You need more colour in them and to make the blur less heavy, as well as reducing the sand. I would also be tempted to reduce the opacity of the clip layer of the horse, as it is very dark and distracting, but the mane and tail are gorgeous!
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 28, 2012 6:40:13 GMT -5
ok, thanks When i can get on my game i will turn down The clip |
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 29, 2012 11:37:13 GMT -5
ok, guys got some more pics to critiqe i used the retouch pro tutorial for the bg... And i had a go at western....  /\ failed...   |
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 29, 2012 13:45:15 GMT -5
Also what breed would you say this horse looks like?
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Post by Kyra vZeeland on Dec 30, 2012 10:18:23 GMT -5
I can give you some tips for improving!  You could add a little more shadows at dark places, and you can add some more loose hairs, it'll give it some ''flow'' xD |
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Post by Drovers Run on Dec 30, 2012 10:32:05 GMT -5
This is a nice American Paint Horse, I'd say! Not bad BTW! |
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Post by Jade Renniw on Dec 30, 2012 10:58:35 GMT -5
ok, thanks guys |
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Post by tizi15 on Dec 30, 2012 15:27:55 GMT -5
Amazing *o*
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