Post by Grace Rosen on Jun 20, 2012 20:01:20 GMT -5
Hi, my name's Grace and I suck at writing. **Please remember this is all fictional. With a hint of non-fiction. :)
I'm not very good with names or titles... can anyone help me with one? I'll love you forever. <3
Lol, I don't mind if you don't like this story but it would help a lot if you DO like it, tell me, because I may be more willing to update more. ;)
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How do you guys like it? At first I thought I could do it as first person but then half way through I decided it to be third person I had to go back and change everything. xD So if you see an 'I' in there anywhere it's Grace's point of view! If that's not too confusing. :)
WOW. This took me a really long time. Feedback would be nicely appreciated.
I'm not very good with names or titles... can anyone help me with one? I'll love you forever. <3
Lol, I don't mind if you don't like this story but it would help a lot if you DO like it, tell me, because I may be more willing to update more. ;)
The horses were so excited to eat this morning. Grace loved waking up at 7AM every morning to know that she was needed for food. But it's always a joy to hear the nickers.
After she fed the horsey's, she went over to the foal paddocks and fed, and loved on them. IS My Lady Friend isn't as nervous as the other foals that are newcomers since Grace bought her back from Alicia. :)
After Grace was finished taking care of the horses feeding, she told Bri she had to work the horses with Nadalee. "But I was going to go to the mall! See a movie! You know... do TEENAGER stuff! Something Nadalee wouldn't understand." Bri said unhappily. Grace looked over and Nadalee just shrugged it off. She was just forever going to be dubbed the crazy horse teen. "Brianna. You told me you wanted to volunteer here. You disappear at inappropriate times, can be a little bit nasty to Nadalee at times, and sometimes you are very disrespectful to me and Lynne. If you want to continue to volunteer here and see Taz, then your attitude needs to straighten up. Starting now."
Grace knew Bri was mad after she said that but what could she do? She can't have her volunteer at Stone Ridge and then just come and go whenever... Her mom and her agreed that she could stay here for the summer. Like a job. Grace doesn't mind her going out or anything but it's a little bit frustrating when she asks her to do something and she just simply says no and then walks away.
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When the girls got tacked up, Grace walked outside to supervise and give tips to Bri since she's still new to riding. Grace saw that Nadalee decided to finally ride her other horse, Charlie. Only bareback. Which worried her a little since he's not as docile as her other horse, Sonny, but she figured it would be okay if she wanted to.
When they were riding, Grace put Nadalee in the front of the cross rails so that Bri could follow on Taz.
Everything was going great until Nadalee wanted to do a higher, more experienced jump. Bri wasn't at the level of riding Nadalee was, so of course, she just had to watch.
"Don't worry, Taz. One day we will be jumping that high. Even higher than Nadalee will ever be able to accomplish with her stupid little push button ponies. We'll do it!"
"Look at that!" Bri said quietly to Taz. "Charlie's so good and trained that he just stands there with no halter. How pathetic."
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How do you guys like it? At first I thought I could do it as first person but then half way through I decided it to be third person I had to go back and change everything. xD So if you see an 'I' in there anywhere it's Grace's point of view! If that's not too confusing. :)
WOW. This took me a really long time. Feedback would be nicely appreciated.